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The Pet Poem

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How boring would it be
to be a fish not swimming free,
To just sit there
and never go anywhere?
And man, to be a crab in a cage
without anyone knowing your age.
Or to be a big smelly dog
getting put on a leash for a jog.
Animals are neat, but sometimes smell
and always manage to snag you in their spell.
just something I kinda threw together a LONG time ago (11-3-04 to be exact) and found last night when I went to scribble down some words again
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hereticschizoid's avatar
The rhyming sounds a little forced (particularly the last two lines) and the flow glitches every now and then, but I like the theme. Very cute :nod